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:iconkiotsukatanna:
This is what happens when I try to figure out what the hell is going on with my anatomy and try to figure out the body types and face shapes for these boys.

This is also me realizing how much I've hated every piece of artwork I've been doing lately.

*sigh*
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:iconfelixneko7:
The legs on both are a little too stout, and the butts should be lower, or at least it appears so to me (I'm using Burne Hogarth's Dynamic Anatomy as reference). Following this thought, the ankle to the foot should be equal in height to the length between the chin and collar-bone. Their bodies are a bit wide for my taste, but that's just my preference, and the transition between waist and hip seems a bit abrupt.

Other than that, lovely work, and keep at it!

Even if you don't agree with my critic, I still think you should check out Burne Hogarth's Dynamic Anatomy. It's got some really interesting explanations and concepts with anatomy and proportions in relevance to artists. It's was only 30 bucks at my local Barnes and Noble, but I had to order it.
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*kiotsukatanna May 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Like I said, the anatomy is really wonky in this, and I definitely need to use more reference and get more practice. I actually have some anatomy books, but I haven't touched them in forever. ID OTL...

Thank you. <:3 I appreciate your comment and critique.
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:iconairspiritoflight:
*flails around happily* >w< My Jessie draws such pretty things, I don’t even.

I adore this, just because sometimes my mental image of their bodies gets muddled. It’s nice to see them side by side. o3o

also dat ass and dem shoulders, gurl…


And their faces! XD Jason’s nose will forever amuse me. I don’t care that I don’t think he’s never been shown with a nose like that— fuck, his button nose is just too funny to pass up. I love the fact that he’s just so… Like, he’s freckly with curly red hair and a button nose okay, and he scared the scum of Gotham worse than Batman. I just have all these feels. XD

And I really love his jaw. Just, something about it makes me love it.

DICK….

Bby, dat booty. Ho lawrd. Very nice to see him built solid but still relatively slim. Dick’s arms! Ffffff you can like fit them inside Jason’s I LOVE IT. >XD I also love Dick’s legs. For no particular reason. They’re just nice legs. AND HIS HAIR. Dick and his fabulous hair. XD And his cheekbones. Mmmhm.

It’s so interesting to see them drawn in a realistic sort of way, because it makes me realize just how funny people really look—I mean, how we’re all proportioned and whatnot.

Their backs are both cool to see, too. >w< Yeah.

Also, sweetling, don't hate on your art. Art is a forever evolving process... And I dunno. I always enjoy your stuff. Realism is hard to swing, because in reality, people translate not very attractively. I definitely respect you for going for this approach to your art because of that-- because you do such a great job in my opinion.

How could you not like the children, though?! Those were ASTOUNDING, especially since you don't do much 'creature' drawing! Those are magnificent. All your works are, in my eyes. Just like you. <3
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:iconhillbillybob:
I think your art looks great. All of it, does. :)

To me, there does seem to be something off about Jason. It's something about his neck and chest area. It still looks great.
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~MamaMrL789 May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Both of them look smexy <w>
And I don't think your previous art was bad! D:
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*kiotsukatanna May 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
>w< Thank you!

And nn, I was having a bad moment last night. ID Just... *waves hand* I'm better now. <:3
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~MamaMrL789 May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! >w<

Well I'm glad to hear that :D
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